LEARNERS RESPONSE ASSESSMENT 1!

 

LEARNERS RESPONSE ASSESSMENT 1:

Mr Halsey's feedback: 
WWW: 
This is a very strong first assessment with good knowledge and understanding shown across the four questions. There is also a clear potential to higher which is great to see- well-done!

EBI: 
  • Question 2 starts really well but needs a little more we will be discussing social and cultural contexts in class
  • Question 3 needs genre theory to push it to the top level. Economic contexts are important too.

One potential point:  Mark scheme 
Question 1: Todorov: disequilibrium suggested by gun; character eyeline looking off-screen suggests danger or threat; tagline references ‘survival’; no hint of new equilibrium.
Question 2: Both products hint at the role society can play in shaping people’s lives which reflects a key theme of British media and culture. In the Ill Manors poster, the tagline for the film literally alludes to this (“Some environments...”)
Question 3: Neale “repetition and difference” – allows producers to evolve genre but maintain audience; Abercrombie “television producers set out to exploit genre conventions... economic sense” ... “Genres permit the creation and maintenance of a loyal audience.”
Question 4: Negotiated readings: an understanding and appreciation that many audiences will adopt somewhere between the two extremes – an acceptance of urban or hip-hop culture without perhaps identifying personally.


One potential point:  Exemplar
Question 1: Including Todorov, Propps and Levi's theories 
Question 2: Discussing and talking about British culture and society views
Question 3: Bringing more theories such as Abercrombie and Naele
Question 4: Including an introduction and conclusion 


Media terminology:
  • Revise and include genre theory
  • Understand and justify social and cultural contexts
  • Reseach and revise economic contexts
  • Avoid repeating the same point 
  • Analyse and understand figures and quotes

Weakest question: QUESTION 2
  • To compare and explain both figures instead of explaining it one by one
  • To include my own knowledge of British value 
  • Write more about social and cultural contexts as more points can gain more marks
  • Include media terminology and examples
  • Talk about the structural society views as a part of 'social contexts'











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